Week 11 Internship Blog
Hello everyone, Patrick Callaghan
here for one final update on my summer internship. This week is not only
important due to it being the final week but also the weekend that I move from
home to the University of Central Florida for the first time. This week has
been busy with working on the Battle of Olustee project, packing getting ready
to move and the final PowerPoint for our group.
Although I have been busy with
these things, I received a file from Dr. Gannon that consisted of the official
records from the battle. These documents have completely changed my summary
from the sources I was using in the beginning. The dynamic between Maj. Gen.
Gillmore and Brig. Gen. Seymour and the complete and blatant disregard of orders
is astonishing. Another interesting aspect of the records is how many people
there at the battle had differences in their stories like when the battle began
and how big the enemy force was. Brig.
Gen. Seymour actually said that the Confederates, by the time the Union forces
retreated, had more forces. However, in reality they had only 5,000 to the
Union’s 5,500. As I mentioned earlier I have had a pretty busy week preparing
for everything.
It still has not yet set in that I
will be living in Orlando tomorrow, and I am not even done packing. I do not
have much new updates based on my work other than trying to fix the issues from
my original summary template and trying to really show the turmoil that took
place before the battle. One aspect that I have found more difficult is
portraying evil in my writing. I have found it difficult to truly portray the
Southerners as an entity that was doing something disgusting to run their
economy, culture, and goals. I think to enhance my writing I need to read or
practice writing in specific tones. Especially with the types of history that interest
me the most, usually during war time or occupations that change the landscape
of the world. Being able to write about topics from a moral standpoint could
give me greater abilities to write.
All in all this has been a great
experience that I look to continue in the future. The amount of wisdom passed
down from Dr. Gannon and the practice has been fun. The only disappointment from
this hole experience is not being able to see the battlefield in person (as of
right now) because of COVID’s variants popping up in Florida becoming a big deal
again. From this experience as well as last semester being online I am not sure
about going back to in-person classes again or if it will be enforced again as Delta
becomes more widespread. But with all that said I can’t wait to experience UCF and
all it has to offer and complete the goals of this project in person if
possible. I hope everyone has enjoyed reading my blogs and my greatest
adversary Florida power and light. Thank you.
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